Your resumes are both well suited to the applications they will accompany. I liked the descriptions of your experiences and the format. Although the exhaustiveness is required for your applications, for other purposes I would pare it down. You use proper language in this resume. I think your resume is scannable.
You have alot of great stuff to say about you and both of your resumes are really impressive. You do a really nice job at seperating all of your unique experiences into different categoiries. I like how you include a vareity of your expereicnes to show your dynamic personality. I would work on being a little more specific under some of your work experiences as to certain things you've done. You do this for some but others are alittle more vauge and should be more detailed. Your resume is a bit long...however i guess this is ok for an academic resume as you said. Because it's longer it's not as easily scannable, maybe work on format or somthing to make layout look a little more scannable. Other than a few minor suggestions it's realy good and I'm impressed.
For the first resume, the college of law, you have a very proven variety of backgrounds, which is what they want I guess. The length may be a problem but not if they really want a diversified background. Overall, the list of experience is good and the format is great.
Your resumes are both well suited to the applications they will accompany. I liked the descriptions of your experiences and the format. Although the exhaustiveness is required for your applications, for other purposes I would pare it down. You use proper language in this resume. I think your resume is scannable.
ReplyDeleteYou have alot of great stuff to say about you and both of your resumes are really impressive. You do a really nice job at seperating all of your unique experiences into different categoiries. I like how you include a vareity of your expereicnes to show your dynamic personality. I would work on being a little more specific under some of your work experiences as to certain things you've done. You do this for some but others are alittle more vauge and should be more detailed. Your resume is a bit long...however i guess this is ok for an academic resume as you said. Because it's longer it's not as easily scannable, maybe work on format or somthing to make layout look a little more scannable. Other than a few minor suggestions it's realy good and I'm impressed.
ReplyDeleteFor the first resume, the college of law, you have a very proven variety of backgrounds, which is what they want I guess. The length may be a problem but not if they really want a diversified background. Overall, the list of experience is good and the format is great.
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